Be honest n tell me what u think of this?

Well the first two lines were okay, but you kept using the same type of words and it started to not make sense. Don't just stick to 'mope, nope, hope' use some varity. That will definitally make your lyrics better. You can always use rhymer.com to help you when you can't think of anything that rhymes with a word you choose. I hope this helps!